3 different genre songs I wrote

[Tanner]

I wrote three completely different genre songs to see if I could do it and make all of them good. Here they are.

Metal: Insanity
Waves of memories
Scores of reveries
All fettered by illusion
There is no constitution

Phantoms of the past
Sanity fading fast
As ravens fly above
I'm falling down below

The spell falls upon me
Distorted sililoquies
Oblivious to surroundings
Unknown voices resounding

Chained in by nothingness
Held back from the vast abyss
Internal destruction brings me bliss
I am my only nemesis


Country: The Girl
She looked at me
With her soft blue eyes
She kissed me on the lips
And to my suprise
She said,
"I love you boy
more than the world,
I would do anything
to be your girl."

Four years later
When we turned 18
We went to her room
And her eyes just gleamed
She said,
"I love you boy
more than the world,
I would do anything
to be your girl."

Now she's my wife
We have two kids
And late at night
When I close my lids
She whispers,
"I love you boy
more than the world,
I am so happy
to be your girl."


Rap: Life to Death
Dazed,
Left on the street to die,
Amazed,
People just passin me by,
Crazed,
Why wont they fuckin help me,
Hazed,
Losin all my memories...

Shot twice in the head,
Lyin on my death bed,
Waitin for somebody to see,
All my fuckin misery,
I can't fuckin take it,
They think I just fake it,
I don't think I can make it,
I'm lyin in a lake of blood...

Dazed,
Left on the street to die,
Amazed,
People just passin me by,
Crazed,
Why wont they fuckin help me,
Hazed,
Losin all my memories...

I'm dead now,
I don't know how,
They just passed me by,
Didn't pick up the phone,
Didn't ask if I was 'right,
Fuckin' people took flight,
As if I'm dynamite,
But it's over now,
Can't you see?
Now I'm put down,
Outta my misery,
Wish I was alive,
To see my brotha Jerry,
My ma an pa,
And my lovely sista Shari,
And my kids and wife,
But it's all over now...
I've lost my life.



EDIT: Edited the rap

[Jimmy (Tarnit)]

woah those are good....

[Swift-Ninja]

not bad on the rap one on the chorus tye thing theres only 2 things i wudnt have put


Dazed,
Left on the street to die,
Amazed,
People just passin me by,
Crazed,
Why wont these people fuckin help me,
Hazed,
All my memories fadin fastly...


THe lines:

Why wont these people fuckin help me

And

All my memories fadin fastly just have no flow other then that gj

[Tanner]

@ Tarnit: Thanks

@ SN: Thanks to you too, and I see what you mean by no flow. I'll edit those lines.

[Swift-Ninja]

No problem skippy

[cras r proud of tanner]

like them all,
cant imagine any sound to them 'cause im well tired n stuff,
but the lyrics are great.



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cheerio.

.cras*

[Bekind]

"*randomly posts in ze old thread*"


lol

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[glow=white,2,300] I miss Tanner soo much [/glow]

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Hate Rap music >.< But FALL OUT BOY AND LINKIN PARK RULEZ!!!!

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But I love sad music www.youtube.com/watch?v=gMRAdNfnxMY How to save a life i realy love this music By The way 1039 HOURS OF JK3 BROTHER ITS HIGH!!!!!!!

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www.youtube.com/watch?v=w8RjaLFkSyc&mode=related&search=the%20fray%20how%20to%20save%20life%20naruto%20sasuke sry the other link work but in the music it stop no where like this but the video continu =.= And ITACHI IS IN THE VIDEO ^^

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[glow=white,2,300] that number of hours includes when I used to host Servers on my main PC. (Non-SecureHost hosting = Xfire detects it as JK3 ) [/glow]

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axis said:

[glow=white,2,300](Non-SecureHost hosting = Xfire detects it as JK3 ) [/glow]

couldent you just write a small code and send it to xfire so it comes up in xfire main window ? like a game o.O