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Post by /\xis on Jul 14, 2006 9:40:47 GMT -5
[glow=white,2,300] YAY! I finally finished typing the Chapter 1 of the Story ^^ !!
The Story Site [/glow]
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Jimmy (Tarnit)
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Post by Jimmy (Tarnit) on Jul 14, 2006 12:04:18 GMT -5
DUDE IT WAS AMZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! crap man it was awsome 1 thing 1 chpater took me like an hour and a half to read.... it was super long.... BUT AMAZING!
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Post by Rabid Seagull on Jul 14, 2006 12:19:15 GMT -5
well done axis! *waits for caxyer to come and kick some ass*
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Swift-Ninja
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Death Has Come In The Eye Of The Ninja!
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Post by Swift-Ninja on Jul 14, 2006 16:19:34 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Still reading but I just want to point out one spelling error I found quite amusing lol
"I just want you to believe in me too. To thrust me and know that I will return for you! "
caption from Axis story hahah, he spelt trust and thrust LOL XD[/glow]
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Swift-Ninja
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Post by Swift-Ninja on Jul 14, 2006 17:09:22 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]OMFG THAT PWNT OMG TAHT ROXXORED MY SOXXORS LOL! Sucks for your girlfriend Axis I feel for ya LOL XD[/glow]
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Post by /\xis on Jul 14, 2006 18:36:33 GMT -5
[glow=white,2,300] You found an error ?? WOW ROFL
I'm French, writting an english long text!!!
There must be about hundreds, thousands of errors LOL ! [/glow]
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Post by /\xis on Jul 14, 2006 18:38:31 GMT -5
[glow=white,2,300] Thx for all the positive comments ^^ Chapter 1 is the... calmest and most boring chapter of all. (Wait until the next chapters comes. Army, special sections, X-Raiders and... oh well... hum... woah... THE DEMONEYES !!! hehe [/glow]
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Jimmy (Tarnit)
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Post by Jimmy (Tarnit) on Jul 15, 2006 16:27:30 GMT -5
sounds scary about how happy u are about that........
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Post by andrew on Jul 15, 2006 19:46:38 GMT -5
i e-mailed you a copy of the story when i read it last.. it has spelling and grammer errors fixed and highlighted.. Cya axis, Andy...
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§hadow Knight
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Clearing the way for the oil brigade.
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Post by §hadow Knight on Jul 15, 2006 23:23:39 GMT -5
Ah the music... It suits it so well, makes me feel as if you're actually talking to me right now...
EDIT: Nice story so far, even with all of the errors.
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Post by rexorz on Jul 17, 2006 3:28:34 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]Nice Axis. i Cant wait for the next Chapters ^^.[/glow]
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§hadow Knight
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Post by §hadow Knight on Jul 17, 2006 6:36:28 GMT -5
I think it gave me an erection.
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Post by /\xis on Jul 17, 2006 9:39:54 GMT -5
[glow=white,2,300] Ohh nooo! Innos, get out of SK's body NOW!! rofl! [/glow]
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Post by zem2 on Jul 18, 2006 1:14:34 GMT -5
Jerk o.O For the storie... i'll read it in 50 part i think. I already read my french book in 30 part, i'll dont read this english text in 1 part XD Its already hard to talk english all time with u (excluding when i trick t-j, and insulting him in french ;D) then: Tampis si vous comprenez pas ce que je dis, je devais le faire une fois et parler français!. Its done... Btw, i love music player , did i'll <3 the story? no one know for moment
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Post by rexorz on Jul 18, 2006 3:04:36 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]Wel like i keep ssaying it pwnz .[/glow]
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